Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinions
Opinions are divided into whether dangerous sports should be banned in order to protect the citizens or whether people can play any outdoor activities that they want. Although I acknowledge the logic behind the former view, I am still in favour of the latter.
Authorities should impose a ban on playing dangerous sports because it can have adverse effects on physical health of the players. Take boxing, for example, although before playing, the players are introduced the laws, but when they are playing, they can be punched in some weak parts of the body. As a result, they can be received bad injuries which can affect their quality of life or even die. Another possible argument is that playing dangerous activities can also affect the traffic. For instance, when playing skateboard, the players can go into the streets, roads so when someone who does not pay attention to them can hit them which can lead to serious accidents.
Nevertheless, I also think that people should freely chose the sports or outdoor exercises that they want to play.First and foremost, with the development of society, many protective clothes are invented to adapt the demand, hobbies of the players. This means that people can have variety of choices to buy these clothes which can also help them to protect themselves form the bad injuries like falling or bleeding. Secondly dangerous sports are really exciting and funny. This means that they have opportunities to enjoy themselves and bring new feelings.
In conclusion, It is understandable that why some people think that dangerous sports can be really harmful and it should be prohibited. However, I think people should be allowed to play any sports that they enjoy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03886925795 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57667689457 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533568904594 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8362236553 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26347214526 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116647819854 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107837460085 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209291613663 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102391667554 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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