There were several inventions in human history, like the wheel, while some people believe that the internet is the crucial invention. However, I agree that the internet is the best invention ever, and I would argue that it makes human life easier.
To begin with, the internet has completely revolutionised this world because it helps people develop other technologies. In other words, the internet is one of the greatest inventions ever because of its applications in other technologies such as video conferencing, cloud computing, and operating system technology. Furthermore, more than half of the world's population uses the internet for a variety of reasons. Firstly, people can get information at the touch of a button, and they can also learn new skills on their mobile phone by using the internet. In the United Kingdom, for example, the majority of students use the internet for educational purposes.
In addition to this, although the internet has some negative impacts on human beings and animals, it cannot be denied that the internet has various advantages. Nowadays, people are totally dependent on the internet because they are totally obsessed with it. Due to the internet, people are now connected with each other in a virtual world. The internet is effective and efficient because it allows humans to multitask while also requiring very few resources to operate. To demonstrate this, The New York Times reported that 86% of American teenagers use the internet on a daily basis as a result of addiction and school-mandated Internet use.
To sum up, the internet helps human beings improve their lives, and the majority of technologies are dependent on it.
- Many people say that universities should only be offered to young students with high marks others say that they should accept people of all ages even if they did not do well Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations Skills such as cookery dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations Skills such as cookery dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 78
- some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicle driver take test each year to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20295202952 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8389600519 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.384803921 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.461538462 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228272958798 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900741891867 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475224383574 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147106763048 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628695110435 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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