Obesity has been a major problem among children for the last few years. In my view, this has resulted from unhealthy habits and physical inactivity, which can be mitigated if parents and the government take proper measures.
To begin with, there are two main factors contributing to obesity. An obvious reason is that the current generation has access to unhealthy food. Unhealthy foods contain a high amount of fat and other harmful nutrition, which causes the problem of being overweight. In addition to this, another deep-rooted cause of overweight is a sedentary lifestyle. Not only sedentary lifestyles are responsible for obesity, but playing video games is also responsible. For example, a survey conducted by the World Health Organization revealed that the majority of kids who play video games and consume fast food on a daily basis suffer from obesity.
Nevertheless, this problem can be solved if lawmakers and parents take proper decisions. Firstly, the government should impose a ban on fast food or increase the amount of tax on fast food companies. As a consequence, kids are less likely to eat unhealthy food. Furthermore, parents should encourage their minors to play outdoor games such as cricket, football, kho-kho, and so on. Playing these kinds of games involves using most parts of the body so that they burn calories, and thus they prevent obesity.
In summary, I believe that a lack of exercise and an unhealthy diet create the issue of obesity, but that government and parents can tackle this issue by making proper decisions.
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries What are the causes of this What solutions can be offered 56
- Today s fresh food like vegetables or fruits travels thousands of miles from the rural areas or farms before it reaches customers in cities or urban areas Why is this Is this a positive or negative trend Give reasons for your answer and include any releva 78
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 78
- Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations Skills such as cookery dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries What are the causes of this What solutions can be offered 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in addition, in fact, in summary, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12204724409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74546108607 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3986385215 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11518061095 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434245526961 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554225064874 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779432035756 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311424416974 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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