Some people believe that the responsibility of saving the environment should lie with politicians instead of individuals because individuals can do to save the environment. A major responsibility for saving the environment should lie with politicians, but i would argue that small steps taken by individuals can help save the environment.
To begin with, there are many things people can do to protect the environment . Firstly, they should not use things that are hazardous for the environment. To explain it further, plastic waste is extremely harmful to our ecosystem so it would be better to use eco-friendly products. Secondly, instead of changing items , people should recycle and reuse it. Consequently, they can save the environment by reducing the waste. In other words, this small practice of individuals plays a important role in saving the environment. For example, Japnese natives use paper bags instead of plastic bags to save the environment, and hence they could mitigate the problem of plasticwaste in their nation.
Moreover, the best way to protect the environment is planting trees because there are a plethora benifits of growing tress. First of all, trees absorb carbon dioxide and give oxigen to individuals , as well as this it also give fruits, flowers ,and leaves, which all are necessary in human being's lives. Furthermore, if farmers use organic fertilizer instead of synthetic fertilizer, then they are not only save land from harmful chemicals but also they will get organic goods. To exemplify, in Dublin ,60% of farmers use organic fertilizer , and hence they only save the environment.
Nevertheless, politicians have potencial to take important steps to prevent the environment. If they impose a ban on un eco-friendly products, this approach might be useful to save the environment. Additionally, they can also run campaign about spreading awareness on the factors that affect the environment , as a result many individuals stay aware from factors that affect the environment very badly. To add further, they can implement waste management system that could be more effective than other methods to save the environment.
To sum up, although politicians have power to save the environment, human's
small steps can more helpful to save environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37883008357 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03968215651 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504178272981 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2146219409 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.277777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9444444444 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157671993652 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582970175503 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572964564035 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089420125726 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533579170332 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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