Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
• suggest someone who deserves the reward
• mention what they have done to help the community
• say what reward you would like to give this person
Dear Sir,
Hope this letter sends you in good health. I am writing this letter to recommend about uncle Minh for reward who have contribuited a lot to the community.
As a Vietnamese resident, I strongly suggest him who work as the community clean-up. He lives next to my house and he is about 60 years old. In recent years, the Dong Nai river was polluted by industrial waste and chemicals local factories and it has a negative impact to local people. His aims is remove as much the Travis from the river as possible. He spend almost his time for collecting rubbish everyday. Besides that, he always encourage the local communities should came together to clean up. However, he have not enough money to buy some equipment, so I think he is the best choice to get the reward.
I am looking forward to hearing about your consideration.
Best regard,
Jenny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...e Travis from the river as possible. He spend almost his time for collecting rubbish ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... almost his time for collecting rubbish everyday. Besides that, he always encourage the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
...bish everyday. Besides that, he always encourage the local communities should came toget...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... came together to clean up. However, he have not enough money to buy some equipment,...
^^^^
Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...get the reward. I am looking forward to hearing about your consideration. Best ...
^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...d to hearing about your consideration. Best regard, Jenny
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67763157895 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59620134554 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703947368421 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2026086797 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6363636364 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200150715812 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062617180789 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705448778121 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133376129125 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076898071964 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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