Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born.
What might be the reason for this?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
It is said that getting settled in the vicinity of one's hometown for the majority of life is what a number of people do. This essay will explain how the sense of security it gives might be the reason and will demonstrate that while it can reduce the pressure of daily life hassles, it may narrow down one's opportunities.
It can be asserted that the feeling of security is rooted in familiarity, and birthplaces are where they are well known. Familiar things are less likely to be harmful, and you will be secure in known environments. Evolutionary studies have shown that people instinctively seek familiar situations because they lead to safety, which is why many people tend to live near where they were born.
On the one hand, the benefit of living close to their birthplace is that individuals can rely on unconditional support since they are associated with family. During financial crises, misunderstandings between couples, and generally, in hard times, the immediate relatives' help plays a significant role in overcoming difficulties. For instance, one of my colleagues who owns an apartment in the same neighbourhood as his mother-in-law says, "She looks after her grandchild while we are at work, and this is excellent because there is no need to search for babysitters or be worried about the kid."
On the other hand, throughout history, humans constantly explored new areas, not just out of curiosity and greed but also to improve their lives. Having said that, staying in the native locality will diminish one's anticipation of the future horizon and limit potential improvement. My sister is a perfect example of this. After she graduated from one of Canada's top universities, the University of Waterloo, and started working as a researcher, even though she could stay there and become a professor, she moved to Toronto to continue her Ph.D. studies at the University of Toronto to broaden her prospects.
In conclusion, the protection that comes from the sensation of closeness might be a justifiable reason why some choose to reside near where they were born. However, even if it eases the stress of day-to-day concerns, restricting future developments is its demerit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...that getting settled in the vicinity of ones hometown for the majority of life is wh...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ng in the native locality will diminish ones anticipation of the future horizon and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97543440132 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.1399659353 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.307692308 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278528082481 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849169971495 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806602453792 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136704328831 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659069963487 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.