Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?
I strongly believe that plenty of young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people who need help such as homeless people, poor people, orphans and so on in the community. Personally, I think advantages be greater than disadvantages to the community and even teenagers.
Firstly, when participating in charity activities, it will be very expensive and time consuming. Besides, most young adults will be affected in terms of study time because these volunteer activities usually take about 1 to 2 days. Moreover, some sponsors can take advantage of volunteer work to make large amounts of money. For example, before the Covid-19 pandemic some celebrities engaged in humanitarian campaigns to earn money. However, they were criticized by netizens.
Secondly, besides the insignificant disadvantages, the benefits be greater than the drawbacks. Charity work is very meaningful and it likewise helps me become a better person. Furthermore, when we do charity work such as helping to distribute charity rice to the poor, building a charitable house for the poor, or establish a humanitarian education program for orphans, we will feel joyful or happy because we have helped other people's lives become better by doing small things. However, if you can't afford it, you can also donate old books, clothes, pens and so on. On top of that, we also can learn some life skills such as knowing how to make friends, knowing how to take care of others, or even cooking. Besides that, we can also learn some useful skills, get more knowledge and cultures from members of the charity organization. Charity work is also a way for us to get to know and explore remote areas.
In conclusion, charity work has many benefits. To raise awareness about the difficult circumstances of poor people, teenagers should volunteer more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... by doing small things. However, if you cant afford it, you can also donate old book...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83418108487 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1302081115 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274182092334 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741426293018 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078080055011 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163112947843 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133119445113 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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