Some people say government should give health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is little room for doubt that the government budget with healthcare ranking the first has always in a dispute. Some people argue that this industry should be priotizied while others think that some domains should be invested more with the taxpayers’money. This essay will elaborate this issues from a multitude of perspectives and give my personal opinion in the end.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that healthcare system plays a vital role in each country. A nation where has an excellent healthcare industry would advance its citizens’s lives. Consequently, other aspects of a country such as labour productivities or innovation index would increase significantly, leading to a nation’s development. Otherwise, lacking attention to this industry could result in tremendous reverberations. For example, COVID-19 was a prominent proof which had badly damaged our lives and restained our economic development for years.
On the other hand, some countries would have their ultimate goal at a particular time which they want to achieve. Thus, government funding would need to focus more on aspects which are related to that aim. For instance, a country that walks out of the war would primarily invest in industrialization and education. After that post-wartime, shifting to the next developing period, they could invest more in healthcare systems. It is not morally wrongful, but rather a well-designed developing plan.
In conclusion, all social areas need to have appropriate funding programs. It depends on the country circumstance that social planners and government would have a ranking order. In my point of view, investing effectively and balanced in all aspects: healthcare, education, industrialization, innovation, etc would lead to sustainable prosperity and happiness.
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- Some people say government should give health care the first priorities some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers money Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...a multitude of perspectives and give my personal opinion in the end. On the one hand, it is un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56934306569 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28792215472 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8963665536 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139582553189 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380617272381 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599391521074 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858759591759 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897834570811 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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