As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of
humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Today, We are living in the world where we are surrounded by technologies. But keep saying that ability of humans to think for themselves is deteriorated than i am completely disagree
with the statement. Technology makes our works easier and efficient. It even increase our imagination because we get more knowledge with the help of that our mind think more ideas
that help us in development.
In older time when we have no technology to communicate with each other so easily and instantly, we wait long period of time for response that keep work on hold with the help of
technology we discuss things faster and it make development for efficient For example, if you remember in mumbai there is heart transplant was done of kid they require that with in 16 hours
so with the help of computer hospital connected with each other and they able to find that and with the help of technical devices doctor able to transplant the heart save life of that
kid, now a days that far technology came.
Nowadays, people start relying on technology specially in urban areas they want to do as much as less physical work possible and that's for machines are made but completely get dependent
on them start making people lazy.But that is not problem with technology so some people was lazy before technology also and like that today also some people are lazy. So it totally depend
on people how they are involving with technology in their life. There are also some people who work efficiently with the help of technology and in the save time they think for new ideas
and new changes what they can make in their life.
If you discuss in any aspect today technology making us thing more reliable for us. Today we can dod education where we want even we go over sea to different country for our education
because we have that level of transport today. Lots of researcher goes different country to do research on important topics and working together make research more intresting and
faster they able to relate things fast they understand each other very well. So technology making things reliable. Even student get chance of work with the scientist whom they want to
work with the help of technology.
In the conclusion, I will say technology help world to develop faster and it help human to think towards new technology and other innovation before that even they do not have imagination
for that because with the help of technology they get different aspects of work with the help of that they get different ways of thinking for the same work.I am completelt disagree
with the author's statement that the ability of humans to think for themselves is not deteriorating even it is improving.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 73
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ink for themselves is deteriorated than i am completely disagree with the statem...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...es is deteriorated than i am completely disagree with the statement. Technology makes o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...our works easier and efficient. It even increase our imagination because we get more kno...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e help of that our mind think more ideas that help us in development. In older...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...r so easily and instantly, we wait long period of time for response that keep work on hold wit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...hnology we discuss things faster and it make development for efficient For example, ...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o transplant the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came...
^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...lant the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came. Nowadays, ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came. Nowadays, ...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...much as less physical work possible and thats for machines are made but completely ge...
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Line 10, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es are made but completely get dependent on them start making people lazy.But tha...
^^^
Line 11, column 34, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...dent on them start making people lazy.But that is not problem with technology so ...
^^^
Line 11, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that today also some people are lazy. So it totally depend on people how they ar...
^^
Line 11, column 183, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...so some people are lazy. So it totally depend on people how they are involving with ...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 20, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... it totally depend on people how they are involving with technology in their life. There ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the save time they think for new ideas and new changes what they can make in th...
^^^
Line 15, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a to different country for our education because we have that level of transport ...
^^^
Line 16, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gether make research more intresting and faster they able to relate things fast t...
^^^
Line 20, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ogy help world to develop faster and it help human to think towards new technology a...
^^^^
Line 20, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that even they do not have imagination for that because with the help of techno...
^^^
Line 21, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rent ways of thinking for the same work.I am completelt disagree with the author...
^
Line 22, column 10, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...work.I am completelt disagree with the authors statement that the ability of humans to...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81330472103 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55131443846 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429184549356 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.440610208 60.3974514979 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.214285714 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243553226866 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962917190425 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753749678512 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883660317814 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749447718486 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ink for themselves is deteriorated than i am completely disagree with the statem...
^
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...es is deteriorated than i am completely disagree with the statement. Technology makes o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...our works easier and efficient. It even increase our imagination because we get more kno...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e help of that our mind think more ideas that help us in development. In older...
^^^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...r so easily and instantly, we wait long period of time for response that keep work on hold wit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...hnology we discuss things faster and it make development for efficient For example, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o transplant the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came...
^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...lant the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came. Nowadays, ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came. Nowadays, ...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...much as less physical work possible and thats for machines are made but completely ge...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es are made but completely get dependent on them start making people lazy.But tha...
^^^
Line 11, column 34, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...dent on them start making people lazy.But that is not problem with technology so ...
^^^
Line 11, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that today also some people are lazy. So it totally depend on people how they ar...
^^
Line 11, column 183, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...so some people are lazy. So it totally depend on people how they are involving with ...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 20, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... it totally depend on people how they are involving with technology in their life. There ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the save time they think for new ideas and new changes what they can make in th...
^^^
Line 15, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a to different country for our education because we have that level of transport ...
^^^
Line 16, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gether make research more intresting and faster they able to relate things fast t...
^^^
Line 20, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ogy help world to develop faster and it help human to think towards new technology a...
^^^^
Line 20, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that even they do not have imagination for that because with the help of techno...
^^^
Line 21, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rent ways of thinking for the same work.I am completelt disagree with the author...
^
Line 22, column 10, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...work.I am completelt disagree with the authors statement that the ability of humans to...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81330472103 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55131443846 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429184549356 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.440610208 60.3974514979 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.214285714 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243553226866 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962917190425 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753749678512 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883660317814 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749447718486 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.