As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

Essay topics:

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of
humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Today, We are living in the world where we are surrounded by technologies. But keep saying that ability of humans to think for themselves is deteriorated than i am completely disagree
with the statement. Technology makes our works easier and efficient. It even increase our imagination because we get more knowledge with the help of that our mind think more ideas
that help us in development.

In older time when we have no technology to communicate with each other so easily and instantly, we wait long period of time for response that keep work on hold with the help of
technology we discuss things faster and it make development for efficient For example, if you remember in mumbai there is heart transplant was done of kid they require that with in 16 hours
so with the help of computer hospital connected with each other and they able to find that and with the help of technical devices doctor able to transplant the heart save life of that
kid, now a days that far technology came.

Nowadays, people start relying on technology specially in urban areas they want to do as much as less physical work possible and that's for machines are made but completely get dependent
on them start making people lazy.But that is not problem with technology so some people was lazy before technology also and like that today also some people are lazy. So it totally depend
on people how they are involving with technology in their life. There are also some people who work efficiently with the help of technology and in the save time they think for new ideas
and new changes what they can make in their life.

If you discuss in any aspect today technology making us thing more reliable for us. Today we can dod education where we want even we go over sea to different country for our education
because we have that level of transport today. Lots of researcher goes different country to do research on important topics and working together make research more intresting and
faster they able to relate things fast they understand each other very well. So technology making things reliable. Even student get chance of work with the scientist whom they want to
work with the help of technology.

In the conclusion, I will say technology help world to develop faster and it help human to think towards new technology and other innovation before that even they do not have imagination
for that because with the help of technology they get different aspects of work with the help of that they get different ways of thinking for the same work.I am completelt disagree
with the author's statement that the ability of humans to think for themselves is not deteriorating even it is improving.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...our works easier and efficient. It even increase our imagination because we get more kno...
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...e help of that our mind think more ideas that help us in development. In older...
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...o transplant the heart save life of that kid, now a days that far technology came...
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...es are made but completely get dependent on them start making people lazy.But tha...
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...that today also some people are lazy. So it totally depend on people how they ar...
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...gether make research more intresting and faster they able to relate things fast t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81759656652 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55131443846 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429184549356 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.440610208 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.357142857 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243553226866 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962917190425 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753749678512 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883660317814 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749447718486 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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