Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by its external appearance. Use specific details and reasons to support your answer.
Don't judge people by the cover. I totally agree with this opinion and think that every single person can't says negative words for another people.
Firstly, what visible in eyes uncertainty correspond with what exist in brain. All people should be selective to valuated someone because what we think sometimes not true. In other words, Most of people just follow their instict without checked the fact, moreover sometimes only heard about some information from another person and wan't to know from another point of view. For instance, I have a lot of friends with the different characters and my first impression to her is very nice person because her face is very positive vibes, however after I know her for a long time she is not like what i think, she likes to talking about another people but in the different case, she always together with who she talked. That's why we must to know specifically about people around us foremost our friends.
Secondly, bad person will stay in behind of the nice face. Sometimes, we never know about what every people thinking about something even they want to make crime. On the other hand, we can't distinguish among good person and bad person, nowdays many people became toll from violence that is because they can't be carefull for found someone with a good attitude. For example, in Aceh many couple when their get a broke from their relationship and a guy can't accept with the decision and thinking how to make the woman difficult to surviving her life until the end the man decided to killing the woman, from this case we can learn about the best person and the bad person. Thus, People we think at the first time we meet was a good person not neceassarily became a best person in our life.
To conclude, appraisal againts all people is very necessary because that can save our life from every crime and bady person around us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
Dont judge people by the cover. I totally ag...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nion and think that every single person cant says negative words for another people....
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'think'.
Suggestion: sometimes think
...ive to valuated someone because what we think sometimes not true. In other words, Most of peopl...
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Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ink sometimes not true. In other words, Most of people just follow their instict without check...
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Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er for a long time she is not like what i think, she likes to talking about anoth...
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Line 2, column 714, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...he always together with who she talked. Thats why we must to know specifically about ...
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Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ether with who she talked. Thats why we must to know specifically about people around u...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nt to make crime. On the other hand, we cant distinguish among good person and bad p...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...toll from violence that is because they cant be carefull for found someone with a go...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun couple seems to be countable; consider using: 'many couples'.
Suggestion: many couples
...h a good attitude. For example, in Aceh many couple when their get a broke from their relat...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...broke from their relationship and a guy cant accept with the decision and thinking h...
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Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...s a good person not neceassarily became a best person in our life. To conclude, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, talking about, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68693009119 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24548688744 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537993920973 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.125225176 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101677897387 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435837083227 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0166661809142 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690054588329 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291051281434 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.