The maps show a coastal area before and after development.
The given maps illustrate the coastal area before and after reconstruction. Overall, the town saw significant changes in terms of infrastructure, transforming from an agricultural area to a recreational one.
on the north of the beach, the main road still remains, however, there are some changes in the surrounding area. the main road branches off to the south, in here, there used to be farm buildings which are then replaced by a car park with 2 footpaths on two sides. The first one on the left comes to a lake where there an unusual land once stood, with an adjacent area for animals. the another on the right comes to agricultural land. however, it was transformed into woods and there is a new cafe near there.
coming close to the beach, the cliffs are almost unchanged, just have some footsteps that allow people to go dơwn and play on the beach. it is clear that the beach changed from the abandoned one to become a tourist area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
...ricultural area to a recreational one. on the north of the beach, the main road s...
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Suggestion: The
...e some changes in the surrounding area. the main road branches off to the south, in...
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Suggestion: The
...ood, with an adjacent area for animals. the another on the right comes to agricultu...
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Suggestion: However
...n the right comes to agricultural land. however, it was transformed into woods and ther...
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Suggestion: Coming
...s and there is a new cafe near there. coming close to the beach, the cliffs are almo...
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Suggestion: It
...eople to go dơwn and play on the beach. it is clear that the beach changed from th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65868263473 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70199918549 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6649122321 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16529236009 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816695388143 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152400305817 0.0843802449381 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133478261135 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131015564425 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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