The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025

Essay topics:

The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025.

The map gives information about the significant change in the conference center between 2010 and 2025.

In general, it is expected that there will be equipped with several modern facilities in order to meet the needs of citizens. Notably with an IT center, meeting room, game room,, and music room.

Regarding the Western of the conference layout, the original garden which was located on the left will be expanded slightly to cover two-thirds of the plan, while the bottommost area of the garden will be constructed with various facilities. There will be planned to build an IT center with cutting-edge devices on the left side, whereas the canteen and kitchen are built in a medium size to serve light meals. In addition, two meeting rooms are constructed next to the canteen and kitchen. Turning to the right side, noticeably these will include the Game room as well as the music room for entertainment.

The Eastern side of the layout will also undergo key changes in the given period. The first notice is the Hall between the room and the car park in 2010 is expanded, while the old car park is replaced by a Residential Hall, expected to contain nearly 20 rooms. Meanwhile, it is notable that the garden in the Easternmost area will be demolished in order to pave the way for a relocated car park.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...eet the needs of citizens. Notably with an IT center, meeting room, game room,, and ...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the needs of citizens. Notably with an IT center, meeting room, game room,, an...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
... needs of citizens. Notably with an IT center, meeting room, game room,, and music r...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...h an IT center, meeting room, game room,, and music room. Regarding the Weste...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an IT center, meeting room, game room,, and music room. Regarding the Western...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ilities. There will be planned to build an IT center with cutting-edge devices on the...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...s. There will be planned to build an IT center with cutting-edge devices on the left s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, third, well, whereas, while, in addition, in general, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79295154185 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57282300046 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555066079295 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.711044162 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0724477941805 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331788293557 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542232720367 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647780026346 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683425431179 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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