Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important. Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is sometimes argued that for some people, acquiring happiness demands having a career that they are keen on, while other elements are mentioned to be more crucial. From my perspective, I partly disagree that possessing an enjoyable job is the only thing that makes up happiness.
On the one hand, in this modernized world, there are various methods of being cheerful, although owning a suitable job is also vital. Happiness can come from the simplest to the most complex things, which depends on whether who you are. For example, as for the elderly labors who have their own families, spending time with their relatives is far more meaningful than concentrating on making money, as their health and physical condition do not allow them to work more. As the time goes by, some people may realise that when they are older, happiness is probably on of the most precious things. Besides, some individuals find happiness in their hobbies, like planting trees or playing sports.
On the other hand, in the case of some people, it is undoubtedly true that having an enjoyable career is crucial, especially for the youngsters, since they are always enthusiastic, which means they will able to follow their personal passions or do whatever job they are obsessed with. Furthermore, some people who are fond of investing time in working or studying exceedingly called the "workaholic", who are often indifferent to other interests.
In conclusion, while having an enjoyable job is important, it should not be considered as the only way in order to be happy. And other elements should also be taken into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 563, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03358208955 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87355831336 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2376145201 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36100005779 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121315582587 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595006543866 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212162316859 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00824419188524 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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