A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Crimes can be of various natures and the cruelty of the crime needs to be analyzed before any punishments. The prompt suggests that one who commits any crime wittingly should be deprived of his/her rights as she/he has broken the social code of conduct. In my opinion, I am consonant with the author to great extent because of the following reasons.
To begin, the nature of the crime is an important factor that needs to be considered for any kind of punishment. The crime might be related to imminent threat that can challenge the existence of the human race. For instance, one might be considering to wreck the whole universe by developing the threatning mass destruction weapons like nuclear and biological weapons. If these is the case then not only he should be deprived of the social rights but also he needs to be punished severely. Similarly we can take the example of the Osama Bin Laden, who wanted to wreck the whole Europe. He hijacked the aeroplane routing towards the USA and attacked the Trade Tower causing the deaths of 1000s of innocent people.Later, he was killed in the military attack by USA. These types of crimes happens very often and they needs to be prevented. Killing the thousands of innocent is a cruel behavior, and therefore, they should be punished strictly -even deaths is less severe for them.
However, always punishing the criminals severely and preventing them to use the basic rights is not a good idea. Sometimes, the severity of the crime might be negligible and they should be treated accordingly. The reason behind the criminal activities needs to be analyzed and consequently, the required method needs to be adopted to prevent the same. For instance, the majority of the criminals in the African countries are involved in the drugs abuse; these is because of the lack of education, job opportunities and the poverty. They know that they are commiting the crime yet, they are compelled to do the same for their living. If the proper education and job that can withstand their family can be provided to the populaces of the Africa, then such crimes can be significantly reduced. So, it is better to find out the roots of the crime rather than merely punishing them.
In conclusion, the criminals that intentionally breaks the laws should be punished, however, sometimes it is necessary to explore the root cause of the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... also he needs to be punished severely. Similarly we can take the example of the Osama Bi...
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Line 3, column 713, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Later
... the deaths of 1000s of innocent people.Later, he was killed in the military attack b...
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Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...s of crimes happens very often and they needs to be prevented. Killing the thousands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87654320988 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66875318462 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520987654321 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5798245492 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.947368421 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154890194252 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548889682704 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793164473381 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113514366297 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874861900161 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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