The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is say that the most necessary useful of music is it help people decrease stress. I absolutely agree with that statemant, but in my opinon music is not stop to this fuction it also have a lot of value in our life. The following essay will discuss how music help people reduce stress and a huge role of music
On the on hand, let talk about the how helpful of music to reduce stress. After the hard working day, under the pressure of work and money people will fell tired and stressfull. Music will come like a best choice for them to relax, forget their worry. For intance, that many people favor come to the concern at weeken for relaxation. In here they can enjoy their life, listen for their favorite song and be them selfves. Also they can taste the lyric, the beatiful beat of the songs and enjoy the wonderful singer's voice.
On the other hand, music is not limit in this fuction it aslo have a huge role for people. It help people more creative, each person can be a producter buy write their own song that they like. And also music can healing their hurt. For example their have many type of music, when they sad a lovely song can help them fell comforted and encorage. Futhermore, music can chance their life, with people have a good voice if go a right way can help them become a famous singer and get a bright future.
To conclude, music have a huge value to our life help people in a lot of aspect. Helping people relax, creative and healing. So music can not be leave in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31914893617 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02202300515 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503546099291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9302710121 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.125 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183009403879 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073070709604 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518824296956 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133209236791 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387440426732 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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