Health has always been a matter of great concern to people. Some people state the government's responsibility to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet.Others believe that it is the duty of every person in a society.I mainly agree with the second point for the following reasons.
Some people think that the government should be the one who cares about public health. In other words, government officials are elected by the public, so they have an obligation to take care of their citizens.Moreover, the government can promote healthy eating by ensuring that food production companies follow strict food safety standards and requirements.For example, according to EMIV newspaper, which is a well-known newspaper in Singapore on food safety, showed that in 2020 the country launched an order to inspect all food production companies within the country to ensure that the source of products put on the market is to ensure food safety standards. However, as adults, we are responsible for our own actions.If we become too dependent on the government for our health, then eventually we would become dependent on them for everything in our lives.This could lead to many serious problems in our lives.
Besides, the government needs to deal with various issues such as national security, domestic, foreign affairs, or other potential threats.If the government had to take care of the health of every individual in the country, it would seem that they would not have enough time for other areas.This negatively affects the development of any country.Above all, health is the most valuable asset to humans, so it is the responsibility of the individual to take care of it.In fact,no one understands our bodies and our health as well as we do .In other words, people instinctively know what foods and activities are good or bad for their health.From there, they make healthy dietary choices for themselves.Therefore, it is important that we take full responsibility for our own assets.
In conclusion, it is unnecessary for governments to guarantee the health of their citizens.Obviously that's the task of each individual.For the above reasons, I think that the public's care of their own health would have greater benefits than adverse effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21546961326 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14562172742 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.742085167 49.4020404114 493% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.714285714 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.7142857143 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.1428571429 7.06120827912 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201641188711 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108245704323 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908848084658 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14452371616 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679205067145 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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