Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some human activities have detrimental effects on the Globe and the wildlife. Some individuals suppose that it is too late to tackle this issue while others assert that sensible methods can be effectuated to ameliorate this status. From my perspective, this scenario is so dire, but feasible measures can be conducted to improve this situation.
For a start, some people’s activities cause serious consequences for environment and ecosystem. In term of industrial expansion, more and more natural resources such as water, land, minerals,… have been exploited. Moreover, the amount of energy used to manufacture merchandise has been sharply increasing. A large volume of fossil fuel and water is used to produce electric which accelerates carbon footprint and harms the natural habitat of many aquatic flora and fauna. On the other side, population has measurably increased so cultivation and livestock farming are promoted to adapt daily demand of human. Deforestation to plant food crop and build cattle barns has been alarmed. Furthermore, urbanization has some disadvantages. For instance, metropolitans need more areas to expand so natural habitat of the majority animal species is occupied. Forest area dramatically decreases cause land erosions, floods and droughts.
To solve this current circumstance, some methods should be carried on instantly. City authority needs to encourage 3-R program (Reduce-Recycle-Reuse) in mass production to protect and save natural resources. In addition, renewable energy such as wind, solar energy, tidal,… should be further researched and applied to manufacturer and consuming instead of using excessive fossil fuel to lessen greenhouse gas emissions. In agricultural aspect, government can boost polyculture to substitute uniculture. Another way is population control. When population increase rate is in controlled, deforestation and environment pollution will be inhibited.
In conclusion, it’s never too late for individuals to protect the natural habitat of animal species. Government and businesses should instantly conduct some methods such as using alternative energy, promoting food-saving, encouraging sustainable development,.. and so on in order to tackle this status
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- Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give your opinio 89
- Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give your opinio 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87076923077 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25638199059 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627692307692 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8990800106 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244777419546 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664995179518 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747587930016 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160614988395 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122777380077 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.