Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives.
Do you agree?
Presently, whether or not fashion industry is an open-ended source of debate. It is often claimed that the fashion industry affects the public badly. In my opinion, I support this statement for several reasons.
People are aware of their appearance in front of others; therefore, they pay much attention to how they dress every day. Instant fashion trends not only create a huge change in the fashion industry, but they also have a bad influence on people's opinions on appearance. For example, the fashion industry being intermittent and short-lived influences people to put more effort in their appearance, thus, they would throw away their old clothes and spend a lot of money on the trendiest jeans or shoes. Moreover, the fashion industry creates appearance obsession in people; thus, it leads to many problems such as depresion or self-deprecation if people dress obsoletely to the newest fashion trend.
Fashion is not only about clothes but it is also related to luxurity. According to a survey conducted by well-known fashion magazine, to follow the fashion trend, the public are willing to spend tons of money on luxury brands such as Chanel or Dior. However, this results in an excessive waste in the way people buy clothes because clothes come from famous brands are expensive. Buying highpriced clothes just to be fashionable is unnecessary. Furthermore, spending money on expensive clothes just to be trendy can cause many individuals to suffer from monetary problems such as debts.
In conclusion, the fashion industry has a negative impact on the society because it not only makes people become obsessed with their outlooks but it also brings about financial issues due to the high prices of clothes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Presently, whether or not fashion industry is an open-ended sourc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13928571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72888694885 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3585124582 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242773479035 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888036471724 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569174195514 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142697189831 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593800320912 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.