What recent news story has affected you the most in what ways has it affected you

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
in early feburary earthquake disaster happ...
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Suggestion: regions
... earthquake disaster happened at eleven region of turkey.They called it disaster of ce...
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Suggestion: They
...ter happened at eleven region of turkey.They called it disaster of century.This acci...
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Suggestion: This
...rkey.They called it disaster of century.This accident had big effect all of people i...
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Suggestion: I
...the world. For a number of reason which i will explore in the following paragraph...
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Suggestion: We
... agensy or tv canals show what happened.We saw how big buildings destroy and how p...
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Suggestion: Accident
... destroy and how people scare or scream.Accident happened at midnight that reason thousa...
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...people remain under rubble of buildings.i believe that doesnt matter where you li...
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...nder rubble of buildings.i believe that doesnt matter where you live everyone understa...
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Suggestion: From
...vy this disaster and try to make empaty.From first day i only whachting news and thi...
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... only whachting news and think what can i do for them about help.I am shocked and...
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...think what can i do for them about help.I am shocked and try understand what is t...
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Suggestion: That
...t is the best way against of earthquake.That parts i am so tired from thinking and w...
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...st way against of earthquake.That parts i am so tired from thinking and whatching...
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...ck and try to create solution that what is best way and speedly help to people.Govermen...
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... is best way and speedly help to people.Goverment and all social organizations spread ele...
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Suggestion: regions
... all social organizations spread eleven region in a days and first step is pull up all...
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...ull up all earthquake victim form under buildings rubble.This period continued more than ...
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...uake victim form under buildings rubble.This period continued more than monht.Other ...
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...e.This period continued more than monht.Other social organization controled food supp...
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Suggestion: Other
...upport and create tent area for victims.Other people who as me only follow process fr...
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...just can suppport only with send money. that is part we see that people how interest...
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Suggestion: I
...ow they worked together to help victims.I call this part hope because we can find...
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Suggestion: I
...ll disaster together. As result when i get this news in first period i badly e...
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Suggestion: badly affected
... when i get this news in first period i badly effected but then i saw how people together figh...
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... first period i badly effected but then i saw how people together fight for victi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, then, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93515358362 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72973968708 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 371.736788602 48.9658058833 759% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.2 100.406767564 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6 20.6045352989 284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959559629038 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357799605777 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495904998206 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587262647876 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551586403015 0.0645574589148 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 11.7677419355 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 58.1214874552 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.1575268817 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.247311828 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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