A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
Dear Sukh,
How are you doing? As you know next month I am going to India to meet my parents. Because I completed my Degree in Canada, plan to stay there for a couple of months over there. I want to thank you from the core of my heart that you are willing to take care of my house as well as my pet which I love the most.
Even though my dog prefers to eat plain donuts every day especially every afternoon still, I always feed him milk and bread two times a day. During the evening, I always prefer to spend my leisure time with him in the playground which you are familiar with and famous for competitions of pet animals.
It would be great if you manage your time to take care of my house and pet while I will be out of Canada. As soon as will coming back, will see you soon. Once again I want to thank you in advance for helping me out.
Your friend,
Nancy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sukh, How are you doing? As you know next mont...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Dear Sukh, How are you doing? As you know next month I am going to India...
^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
... will be out of Canada. As soon as will coming back, will see you soon. Once again I w...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, while, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06936416185 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99367505339 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6065784728 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228132342692 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107393555833 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899965860255 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131273434831 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590711678899 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.03 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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