Write a letter to your friend with whom you spent a weekend participating party regarding his relocation to new house. In the letter you should
- Describe what you liked the most at their new apartment
- Why did you like the weekend?
- When and where do you want to meet them again?
Dear Priyank,
Hi! I’d like to thank you for inviting me for the party last weekend. I enjoyed the time there and loved meeting you after a long time.
I love the concept of your house, it looks quiet simple from outside but when I entered in your house for the first time I was blown away by the surprise after looking at your modern furniture and the colour combination of walls. The most impressive room for me is the combination of a gym and theater room. I love this innovative idea that you can utilise the same room for two different purposes.
As you know we all friends met after 2 years, I litterally had nostalgic feelings of our college days. The food was so delicious and I will not forget the night we spent outside while partying whole night by playing games in a gaming parlour and spending time in the dance club.
I am thankful for your great arrangements and I would like to meet you guys again this summer. I think we should go to Goa and enjoy a short vacation. Let’s hope that we all can manage to meet. Best of luck for your brand new hardware shop.
Lots of love,
Ronak.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d loved meeting you after a long time. I love the concept of your house, it look...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...essive room for me is the combination of a gym and theater room. I love this inno...
^^
Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...different purposes. As you know we all friends met after 2 years, I litterally had nos...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36231884058 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25669543244 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9217583375 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216153453545 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740258663832 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616804857607 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139874294361 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566447705576 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.