Most people in the world think that life 100 years ago is more difficult and inconvenient than nowadays. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement. There are three reasons why I find this claim reasonable which I will explore in following essay.
First and foremost, when our grandparents were a kid, technology back then is still poor and low-quality. Current life has various advanced inventions in many fields such as transportation, communication, health and education. Hence, people's daily life is benefited by these advancements. They help to improve living conditions and life's convenience.
Secondly, people in the past still struggled with incomplete or even unfair law. Thus, their lives might have to suffer from events that still be unregulated, supported or protected by government. In contrast, law nowadays is further improved and always be monitors by many organizations besides government. Therefore, it creates a chance for people to have their rights and benefits protected by regulation organizations. Their lives can avoid suffering from unnecessary and unfair problems.
Thirdly, wars and conflicts usually happened in the past. People always had to live in temporary, insecure state. However, it is not a problem in current time. The world has remained peaceful for many years, thanks to the innovations in international organizations. Due to stable peace, the nation resources will not be mostly used in army development like it used to be. People can focus on improving many different aspects in life. Therefore, it will be benefits for people as a whole.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that life is easier and more comfortable for current people than it was one hundred years ago. This statement is supported by nowadays advancement in technology, more supported law and more peaceful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ed to be. People can focus on improving many different aspects in life. Therefore, it will be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40069686411 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05743520204 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7922214318 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8095238095 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155999438805 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431164134936 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505135723881 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101758256657 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748177126469 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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