Living in an advanced society, people now possess more free time than they used to. Therefore, what is the most preferable way to enjoy our free time has attracted much social concern. Different people have a different reason for their different choice between having a fiction and enjoying movies. Personally, I fine the former more reasonable.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is the details of fiction. The fact is that movies have a limited time which forces them to be cut down in their storyline. However, this does not happen in novels and short stories. Fiction writers are free to write what is in their mind, as the result, their stories are more detailed. Consequently, readers gain a huge benefit by spending time for reading fiction. More interestingly, fictional stories do not have many pictures or photos. Accordingly, it requires readers to imagine the characters, scenes and story by themselves. Each individual will possess a different aspect which results in a different in their imagined pictures. Thus, the plot is bound to be intrigue with every reader. As the result, novels and short stories are more enjoyable to readers.
On the other hand, some people might say that books are made of papers. Therefore, it is obviously to say that fictional books will be more expensive. However, it is not always true. In fact, thank to advanced technology, we now have e-book. Everyone can easily download an e-book into their phone. Moreover, fictional books are likely to be sold in digital form. Thus, they are certain to be cheaper than paper form. Unlike movies which need a studio to be created, books only need one. With no doubt, it is possible to say fictional books are cheaper than buying a movie.
To sum up, having a more detailed plot and possessing a cheaper price are convincing reasons for my choice. It is highly recommended that everyone should carefully consider my writing to make a suitable decision on what to do in free time.
- TOEFL T P O 07 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree?Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. 60
- TPO 06 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- It has been said, "Not all learning takes place in the classroom." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from personal experience with knowledge gained from classroom instruction. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? 70
- TPO 05 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to suppor 71
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in fact, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88427299703 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59790208893 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0685933685 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.84 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.48 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218396325365 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630911991122 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747533679353 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12016310862 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709086520936 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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