It has been universally acknowledged that phenomenon of obesity and physical inactivity is at an alarming rate in current scenario. This problem has been dip pressing magnitude. Although, a plethora of reasons are there, yet some sensible solutions are available to curb this grave concern.
Commencing with the cause which is responsible for the growth of it. The foremost of which is the technological innovation deeply affected the lifestyle of people. To demonstrate this, young generation spends most of their time in front of the table with their laptop and a cup of coffee or toffee because they are under the impression that automation drives the world and life so that they run the technology train at a maximum speed. The second contributing factor is that, over usage to unhealthy diet and avoiding regular physical exercise lead to the chronic decease such as diabetic and cancer.
In order to solve this serious issue, some measures can be taken, first of all, need to provide education and awareness to the public and youth about the importance of balanced diet and regular exercise. To illustrate this, country’s educational board should format syllabus according to the healthy lifestyles and essential to adhere the institutions follow the guidelines and encourage the children to follow healthy habits. In addition to this, authorities should have implement strict punishment to the restaurants and food suppliers those who violate or promote junk foods and unhealthy diets.
Moreover, everyone should maintain a balance life style like having their food on time and find a time for brisk walk during their duty and morning or evening jogging. Therefore, we could have developed a healthy generation and strong society.
To recapitulate, unquestionably, this problem has become a burning question of the day. Therefore, it is not an easy task to solve this, government and people should come forward to mitigate this complex issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'implemented'.
Suggestion: implemented
...dition to this, authorities should have implement strict punishment to the restaurants an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82246435982 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6507976723 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197131236891 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565615402208 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308284001984 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918526499639 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265548487849 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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