The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leader in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree the claim.In developing and supporting your posiyion, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A good leader is one who is able to guide his/her team towards the goal and motivate each team member to give their best efforts to help achieve a collective aim. The leader is a person who can be entrusted with a plethora responsibilities - he must be unpartisan to be able to treat every subordinate equally, must gain the respect of his entire team and be deft to direct the team towards the final goal. In order to achieve all the skills required to be a good leader, the spirit of cooperation and unity should be promoted among the children.
Every good leader, that history has witnessed, has been able to gain the trust and respect of his/her subordinates. Mahatma Gandhi, for example, spent years trying to understand all the problems faced by the oppressed population of India under Brtish rule and empathize with the mass public. His sense of team spirit was the reason why most of the general people could trust him. He gained their respects by fighting for his people and not for any other selfish cause. He showed all signs of a great leader when he sought to resolve the troubles of his followers by campaigning unity and cooperation among the public. Had he been a competitive leader, India may not have been united to revolt against the British rule.
An unprejudiced leader will be competent to resolve intra-team disputes as well as to keep the moral of his team members high. The true test of management skills is during trying times; how a leader is able to get his subordinates to conitinue to strive even when prospects of success are bleak indicates the leader's talents. This can work only when the leader considers himself as one of the team members. His competitiveness and ego will only end up with bad results.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...his subordinates to conitinue to strive even when prospects of success are bleak ind...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69607843137 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5975437229 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1085212846 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101761616928 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429023120001 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326981499413 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697457912073 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329484271467 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...his subordinates to conitinue to strive even when prospects of success are bleak ind...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69607843137 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5975437229 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1085212846 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101761616928 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429023120001 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326981499413 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697457912073 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329484271467 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.