Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter,
suggest how you could help her in her home
say why you would like to do this work
explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing here with reference of newspaper advertisement, that you are looking for a person that can help you in house hold work. Here, I would like to express my interest in this opportunity.
I am an University student here in town college and studying fashion designing. In addition to study I am good at performing daily house hold chors like laundary, cooking to washing dishes. I had been assisting my mother in domestic work back then in school days as she is a working lady, moreover, here in my hostel also, I am taking care of all of daily my house hold work by myself.
I can sapre two to three hours daily after my college between afternoon to evening. The purpose behind my interest in this job is to earn and save some amount for post graduation dissertation project, this is an added advantage for a fashion graduate. Therefore, I decided to look for a part time job and came across this advert.
I will be available throughout the year except month of November as this is the month of examination and I will be requiring time for exam prepration.
Hope, you will consider my application and find it suitable for the job.
Looking forward to hear positive response from you.
Your Faithfully
Lokesh
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y interest in this opportunity. I am an University student here in town college...
^^
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ate. Therefore, I decided to look for a part time job and came across this advert. I w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...uitable for the job. Looking forward to hear positive response from you. Your Fai...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73181818182 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67595275379 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5669935169 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131514141608 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052413444744 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05186646471 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617653663458 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365014323317 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y interest in this opportunity. I am an University student here in town college...
^^
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ate. Therefore, I decided to look for a part time job and came across this advert. I w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...uitable for the job. Looking forward to hear positive response from you. Your Fai...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73181818182 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67595275379 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5669935169 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131514141608 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052413444744 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05186646471 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617653663458 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365014323317 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.