The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that team sport is the best way to boost cooperation between children. I agree with this idea.
On one hand, there are various ways that schools can do to promote teamwork in the school environment. For example, organizing extracurricular activities or projects that enable children to work in groups. Teachers can divide the class into teams to play mini-games and clean classrooms, with prizes for winning and the fastest team. Those activities can create competitiveness between children, therefore teaching them how to collab with each other.
On the other hand, I believe that children will learn collaboration skills better through team sports compared to others since playing sports seemed to be the most competitive activity, and requires close interaction of members. children will have the opportunity to discuss the strategies with other members, receive certain tasks, and support others in emergency situations as well, therefore improving their cooperation skills. Additionally, as sports are considered to be the most competitive activity, gaining achievement through team sports can bring children strong happiness and enthusiasm that are different when considering with other activities, hence encouraging them to cooperate in the next times. The more children work together, the more they know to cooperate more efficiently.
in conclusion, children can learn teamwork in many ways, however, team sports is the most effective method. Schools should organize team sports competitions and encourage them to participate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69098712446 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94625111969 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613733905579 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.098309595 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298033350725 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114456937178 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686331723362 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201010791129 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054442994868 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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