The diagram below shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperature mountains.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the distinctions between mountains in tropical and temperate regions.
Overall, the tropical mountain is greatly higher than the temperate one. It is also noticeable that the tropical mountain has more altitude-based sections which are suitable for a variety of plants than the temperate one does.
About the mountain in tropical regions, its total height is 5,500 meters and there are 6 definitive sections. The warm zone is the lowest part where tropical vegetation grows at an altitude of below 510 meters. The temperate zone is situated at a higher altitude, up to about 1,700 meters, which is appropriate for growing coffee and cocoa. The next section is called the cool zone, which ranges from over 1,700 to 3,000 meters. Grain is possible to be cultivated in this zone. The higher section is the forest with the boundary for broad-leaf trees at precisely 3,000 meters, and pines and firs virtually 4,000 meters. Upwards are the zone for alpine meadows, and at the top of the mountain is the permanent snow with the line at around 4,5000 meters.
About the mountain in temperate regions, its total height is 12,000 meters and there are 4 distinct sections. The altitude below 5,000 feet is favorable for grains, potatoes and flax. Broad-leaf trees are limited to the forest situated between about 5,000 and over 6,000 feet. Alpine meadows are located at a higher altitude ranging from above 6,000 to more than 9,000 feet (the boundary for the snow). The peak of the mountain is the highest point and covered with snow permanently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...propriate for growing coffee and cocoa. The next section is called the cool zone, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.030651341 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49746131432 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490421455939 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9877751091 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149096735993 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672484620495 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052807661579 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123293349608 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514065093028 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.