The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The chart illustrates what Anthropology graduates from a college did after they finishing their studying at a university while the table demonstrates the incomes of anthropologists from work after five years working.
As can be seen from the pie chart, the number of anthropologists working full time accounted for the largest percentage while the data of those who have part time work and do postgrad study took up the least rate. In addition, anthropology graduates after 5 year working for government have higher salary, compared to other sectors.
To begin with, the number of anthropologists who work full time took up the highest ratio, which was 52% whilst the rate for those who have part time job was 15%, which was the second highest data. Besides, the figure for anthropologists who work part time and study postgrad made up just 5%, which was the lowest proportion. Moreover, the amount of those who have no job took up 12% while the rate for those who have full time postgrad study and have no information took up the same ratio, which was 8%.
On the other hand, the figure for those who work for government and have salaries above 100.000$ take up the largest percentage, with 50% while the rate for freelance consultants and private companies was 40% and 30% respectively. For salary level from 75.000$ to 99.999$, freelance consultants accounted for 40% whereas the figure for government sector and private companies was 30% and 25%, respectively. Moreover, for salary level from 50.000$ to 74.999$, data of private companies took up 35% which was the highest figure, compared to freelance consultant and government with 5%.
Finally, for the range of salary from 25.000$ to 49.999$, the ratio of freelance consultant and government sector held the same proportion with 5% whereas the data of private companies accounted for 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, moreover, second, whereas, while, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 306.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08169934641 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77644143172 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424836601307 0.622605031667 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.060091272 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.6 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149293361357 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092799758379 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126911221394 0.0603063233224 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143217041613 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160995039915 0.0580467560999 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 8.37731958763 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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