Should government build more roads to allow more vehicle owner or improve the network of public transport?
"Government should build more roads to allow more vehicle owner or improve the network of public transport ?" has become an integral part of rising debate in the present world including Vietnam while components of the argument are in favor. however the opponents are completely against the relevance of over disclusion. Personally I strongly agree that improve the network of public transport.
To comence with, public transport has many good sides. The most prominent one is that people do not worry about the weather as rain, sun, wet and dust. another good point would be that have fewer trafficjam. Thirdly it is cheaper than vehicle owner.
On the orther hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant disadvantages of the vehicle owner is that it is expensive. another problem is that it consumes a lot of fuels
To conclude, there are two sides to everything and this situation is not an exception. The topic has become a crucial part of out life. Therefore, efficient use of public transport should be promoted, however, its misuse should be condemned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oblem is that it consumes a lot of fuels To conclude, there are two sides to ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1207.87684729 75% => OK
No of words: 180.0 242.827586207 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72130937075 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7429470488 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423884299614 0.242375264174 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114582290651 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157131539778 0.071462118173 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201916023519 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196143659503 0.0609392437508 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.