Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads. Do you agree or disagree with the views. What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety.
In this contemporary ere, cinematic videographies and films demonstrate mind boggling car chases which, however, have resulted in an increase in the ratio of car accidents. In my opinion, thriller movies with magnificent car stunts should not exceed a certain threshold allowing the peace and humanity to continually reside in the society creating a balance between entertainment and the real life mmight conclude to a safer environment for motor vehicle drivers in this busy world.
To begin with, movies these days tend to incline more towards fictional content rather than realistic content. Many folks believe that everything which happens in films can be executed in real life because of the lack of eduction or awareness. On the larger scale of the entertainment industry, mankind is fascinated by so many cool car chasing scenes so much so that they want to implement those scenes in reality. Little do they realize that these scenarios require tremendously large set up ensuring the safety of performers. Young adults, or movie maniacs in general, experiment those cool scenes and end up hurting themselves as well as those in their vicinity. This leads to the creation of chaos in the society.
Pradoxically, there are warnings displayed beforehand and also during the movies. The ignorant nature of humans combined with stubborness have led to an ascend in the number of roadkills and car accidents. These accidents are generally occuring when a group of friends or colleagues, go out for a trip or other social activities. Even though they in active state of mind, thinking and driving consciously, folks experiment various stunts and chases inspired from the movies and cause terrible accidents.
In conclusion, awareness should be spread by showing the Behind-The-Scenes content and inform the world that these movies are solely made for entertainment purposes.
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| 2023-05-14 | p2 | 89 | view |
| 2020-02-10 | Gladish Lince | 47 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32214765101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90817070876 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634228187919 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4073292552 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205453168746 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613674634122 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479938960501 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111062193697 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331209494693 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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