Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Watching movies is a popular activity to do and movie industry has been so successful from 1900s. Some people argue that it is so wasteful when we spend time watching movies. I totally disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will point out advantages of watching movies.
Firstly, watching movies is a great choice to entertain. These days, most of people are living in a hectic lives, but they need to know that they also need to do something interesting to relax. We can watch movies after working, studying. The are plenty of kinds of movies, which are convenient and suitable for everyone’s interests. It is no more happy than have some free time to watch movies after a tiring day. Watching movies can release stress, motivate us and it is helpful to improve our mental health. Personally, I often watch movies to entertain myself when I am stressed out and it always works, movies always cheer me up. Thanks to movies, I can have more free time for myself and it now becomes my hobby.
Secondly, we can learn a lot through movies. There are many educational movies that are useful and beneficial for us. For instance, my sister has been learning English from movies, that’s why she has a natural English speaking accent. A lot of language learner choose watching movies as a tool to learn languages. Moreover, they can also learn many others things from movies, which they aren’t taught at schools. I opine we should let children watch good movies when they are small because they will learn good things from them and enrich their know horizons.
To conclude, I believe that watching movies is not a waste of time due to its benefits. Watching movies is a enjoyable way to relax and also a good resource for learning. Movies are not terrible if we can manage time to watch them and know how to choose suitable movies.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... great choice to entertain. These days, most of people are living in a hectic lives, but they ...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n watch movies after working, studying. The are plenty of kinds of movies, which are co...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to entertain myself when I am stressed out and it always works, movies always c...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to watch'.
Suggestion: to watch
...ccent. A lot of language learner choose watching movies as a tool to learn languages. Mo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...due to its benefits. Watching movies is a enjoyable way to relax and also a good ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71517027864 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42440757941 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520123839009 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.340575305 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5238095238 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302900554825 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103229545756 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807521707868 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223525879702 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958670545037 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... great choice to entertain. These days, most of people are living in a hectic lives, but they ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n watch movies after working, studying. The are plenty of kinds of movies, which are co...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to entertain myself when I am stressed out and it always works, movies always c...
^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to watch'.
Suggestion: to watch
...ccent. A lot of language learner choose watching movies as a tool to learn languages. Mo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...due to its benefits. Watching movies is a enjoyable way to relax and also a good ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71517027864 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42440757941 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520123839009 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.340575305 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5238095238 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302900554825 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103229545756 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807521707868 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223525879702 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958670545037 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.