Many people say that the internet is the most important invention ever. Do you agree or disagree with this and if not, what do you believe to be more important?
It is an irrefutable fact that computer-based technologies are dramatically altering many aspects of our lives. Particularly, the internet has become a basic life necessity; therefore, many believe that it is the most essential invention of humanity. I completely agree with this opinion. The following paragraphs will highlight my perspective along with relevant examples.
To commence with, the internet is making our daily routine easier. Nowadays, all banking operations can be processed online. Individuals do not have to visit the bank in person, spending time and waiting in a queue to pay the bills. Similarly, people can connect with long-lost friends, or loved ones from any corner of the world and have a video or messaging chat. We can do shopping, book accommodation, reserve tickets, and many more. Secondly, we can use the internet for professional purposes. Take, for example, remote-working opportunities. In today's society, talented people can get employed in global corporations while living in another country and earn a higher salary.
Moreover, the global web is an inexhaustible source of various information. Before the invention of the internet, people were quite limited by the information provided in libraries. However, nowadays, information is easily accessible. For instance, I became a software engineer by watching tutorials on Youtube and reading relevant books. Families that cannot afford quality education, can provide their children with internet access and encourage them to study.
In a nutshell, the internet is offering opportunities that were even unthinkable for the previous generations. Ergo, there is no doubt that this innovation was the most remarkable in history, and turned the world into a small global village.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5873605948 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13082668057 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669144981413 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7874694384 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1052631579 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207792149031 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547695611564 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499075602928 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109411698071 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456560615399 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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