Some people think that money is the best gift to give youngsters.While others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Receiving money as a gift from others is a consider as a best reward for teenagers.Few individuals assume that money given to youngsters is a best gift while others disagree.I,personally disagree with the notion as parents allready providing them pocket money and they become dependent.
To begin with latter view.teenagers can indulge into wrong activities.When masses offer them currency as a reward ,they can buy the thing unnecessarily which are not required for them.To illustrate,they can purchase harmfull drugs also that led to destroy their future.In addition to this,children can become dependent on others .They will always except money from others and never value the real cost of rupee.Resultantly,they cannot do any work by themselves when others give them money.
Moving further,there are alternate gifts for children.masses can give alternative gifts to the teens so that they can help them to become creative such as books ,toys .eventually,they encouraged themselves for purchasing those thing by themselves.Moreover,parents are giving them money as a pocket money. Others have no need to offer them money as a reward because guardians fulfilling their basic needs.For instance,many of the kids are receiving huge money for months expenses Which help them to use according to their needs.
To conclude,money as a gift for youngsters is sometimes become threat for all.If others give money to children as gift then they will not properly develope their mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48471615721 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65439310511 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.957606435 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.2 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234327342304 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15652769415 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745810249212 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178877932601 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639470024466 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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