Some people think that money is the best gift to give youngsters While others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eceiving money as a gift from others is a consider as a best reward for teenagers.Few indi...
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Suggestion: the
... as a gift from others is a consider as a best reward for teenagers.Few individua...
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Suggestion: Few
...consider as a best reward for teenagers.Few individuals assume that money given to ...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
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Suggestion: the
...ssume that money given to youngsters is a best gift while others disagree.I,perso...
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Suggestion: I
...rs is a best gift while others disagree.I,personally disagree with the notion as ...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , personally
...s is a best gift while others disagree.I,personally disagree with the notion as parents all...
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Suggestion: When
...agers can indulge into wrong activities.When masses offer them currency as a reward ...
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Suggestion: ,
...n masses offer them currency as a reward ,they can buy the thing unnecessarily whi...
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Suggestion: To
...ssarily which are not required for them.To illustrate,they can purchase harmfull d...
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Suggestion: , they
... are not required for them.To illustrate,they can purchase harmfull drugs also that l...
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Suggestion: In
...s also that led to destroy their future.In addition to this,children can become de...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , children
...destroy their future.In addition to this,children can become dependent on others .They wi...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...,children can become dependent on others .They will always except money from other...
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Suggestion: They
...hildren can become dependent on others .They will always except money from others an...
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Suggestion: Resultantly
... and never value the real cost of rupee.Resultantly,they cannot do any work by themselves w...
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...value the real cost of rupee.Resultantly,they cannot do any work by themselves when o...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...thers give them money. Moving further,there are alternate gifts for children.masses...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...lp them to become creative such as books ,toys .eventually,they encouraged themsel...
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...m to become creative such as books ,toys .eventually,they encouraged themselves fo...
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Suggestion: , they
...creative such as books ,toys .eventually,they encouraged themselves for purchasing th...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'those things'?
Suggestion: this thing; those things
...ey encouraged themselves for purchasing those thing by themselves.Moreover,parents are givi...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...or purchasing those thing by themselves.Moreover,parents are giving them money as a pock...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , parents
...asing those thing by themselves.Moreover,parents are giving them money as a pocket money...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pocket money'.
Suggestion: pocket money
...reover,parents are giving them money as a pocket money. Others have no need to offer them mone...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...them money as a reward because guardians fulfilling their basic needs.For instanc...
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Suggestion: For
...guardians fulfilling their basic needs.For instance,many of the kids are receiving...
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Suggestion: , many
...ulfilling their basic needs.For instance,many of the kids are receiving huge money fo...
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Suggestion: , money
...according to their needs. To conclude,money as a gift for youngsters is sometimes b...
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Suggestion: If
...ters is sometimes become threat for all.If others give money to children as gift t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48471615721 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65439310511 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.957606435 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.2 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234327342304 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15652769415 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745810249212 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178877932601 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639470024466 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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