In this day and age, With the development surge of cutting-edge technologies and breakthrough civilization, The vast majority of residents have been more and more missed about the historic origin, particularly their identification from past to now, whlist, there are still some people who have the tendency into researching about the history of their own accomodations or be relatively areas. To clarify, I will outline some reasons about this propensity
To begin with, One reason why people are very fond of finding out the historical merits of the house or builiding they live in is that they want to connect with the past and learn more new-found knowledge about their ancestors or the previous occupants of their home. This can give them a sense of identify and belonging, comprehend more profoundly ethnic or generation origins. Another reason that it is worth considering is that they want to understand the structure and infrastructural scales as well as the construction methods of their house or building. This can help them to appreciate as a positive direction about the architectural style and design, simultaneously, as well as deliberate some spontaneous risks or potential problems that may arise from historically old or extraordinarily ancient styles. Furthermore, The awareness of those issues may address thoroughly some old or unsafe materials or techniques. This can also help them to plan for any repairs, alterations or maintenance in relation to their requirements.
There have several research methods that people can ultilize to find out about this history. They can request local recoeds from the authorities or old owners of that building to clarify the inquires those needs such as :permits, deeds, maps or surveys.Also, they may also consult some historical source of websites such as: newspapers, books, magazines or online databases that may contain the information or images of their house or building.Furthermore, Interviewing some residents or experts who have been specialize in history.
In conclusion, Researching about the history of the house or building we live in is fairly essential for many our aspects of life. Not only are they aware of our original ethnic but also broadening the knowledge effectively tied to practical merits for better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33977900552 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16977485078 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.864926999 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.727272727 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9090909091 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395031813306 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147630507675 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934733585674 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2278804881 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484098484896 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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