Write about the following topic:
People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face.
What are the reasons for this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
With the addition of the latest technologies to human society, people now prefer conducting their dily life activities like buying things and meeting people via the internet. There are various reaons can be highlighetd for these changes. Although, these changes positively influenced human life, the downsides cannot be ignored. I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with the reasons for these changes, firstly, human always want to make their life easier. Due to the wider access to uninterrupted internet facility and availability of cheaper smart technologies having online audio and video communication system, people find it convenient to meet and talk with friends, relatives and colleagues vitually. On the one hand, it is a time saving option as people do not need to move or travel to a distant place to meet with their peers. On the other hand, people can focus to anoher task after finishing conversation which was not always possible if people meet face to face as they needed to spend more time together.
Similarly, after the internet facility becomes available, entreprenueurs tend to advertise their product online to gain wider cosumer attraction. This helps to develop e commerce system where people can sell and buy goods online. This provided tremendous benefit to the consumers.They can choose product freely based on the price from a large variety of products. Hence they can order or buy their required things online very easily. Moreover, online banking and payment system are now more secured which encourages people for shopping via the internet.
However, these changes are obviously beneficial improvement of the society. Because, people can now saves time and money that they needed to spend for traveling. They are now able to see and talk relatives or friends from a long distance. Furthermore, people can do shopping anytime from home. But, they are also impacting negatively to our society and metal health. As people are now socializing less in face to face, they tend to suffer more depression. Additionally, less movement causing people less physical work. As a result, peoples health are also affected negatively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...price from a large variety of products. Hence they can order or buy their required th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26934097421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7224701852 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573065902579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2510344977 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5714285714 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275038701288 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779047678245 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452379634712 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162589754898 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02675192626 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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