The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph is illustrating the comparative figures of the tea and coffee purchasing and consumption practices by the people in some Australian cities in the last month. Overall, there are three different habits people used to practice when it comes to use of coffee and tea. Some people love fresh coffee, some like instant one while others enjoy them at the cafe.
To begin with the fresh coffee, among all the city dwellers, sydney shared the highest percentage (around 44%) of people who bught fresh coffee, followed by melbourne and Hobart. While least percentage of people enjoyed fresh coffee in other two cities.
Regarding instant coffee, people in the Hobart enjoyed the instant coffee most accounting 54% which is followed by Brisbane and Adelaide accounting 53 and 50% respectively. But lowest proportion of Sydney people loved to buy instant coffee among all other cities.
However, generally in every cities, more people tend to go to cafe for having tea or coffee instead of purchasing them. In this case, Melbourne is at the top (63%) which is followed by Hobart and Sydney accounting 62.5% and 61% citizen respectively who went to cafe. But Adelaide had the lowest proportion of people (49%) who enjoyed going to cafe. This was even outweighed by the amount of people purchased instant coffee which is exceptional considering the general trend.
To sum up, goin to cafe was the most enjoyable habit for the people in all the five cities in the last month, which was followed by puchasing instant coffee and fresh coffee respectively.
- The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should spend about 20 minutes on this task 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- In many countries international tourism has become an important source of income However it also has negative effects Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from y 67
- The two diagrams illustrate the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it ascends and descends in flight Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should spend about 20 minutes 56
- Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'While the least'.
Suggestion: While the least
...ffee, followed by melbourne and Hobart. While least percentage of people enjoyed fresh coff...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ffee, followed by melbourne and Hobart. While least percentage of people enjoyed fres...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01162790698 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54013218123 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492248062016 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1495529987 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153445413129 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709470199725 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443502938311 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100085637042 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033629111079 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.