It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional live and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages.
It is argued that should people take challenges in their careers and private lives. I have to admit that this has certain advantages, and people, who is willing to take risks are more beneficial than those don’t.
To commence with, many people decide to face hazards because they know that they can broaden their horizons, they can learn more than just doing mediocre things because they have the chance to experience new things. Even if they fail, they can learn from mistakes. In addition, facing incidents means they step out of their comfort zones, they will be more confident, and more skillful in certain fields. Take some K-pop stars as examples, they are masters at dancing and singing, but recently, more K-pop celebrities have joined other fields, such as acting. This helps them to be more popular and close to the public. One more time, I need to assert that it’s essential to take dangers if you want to achieve more and create breakthroughs in your career. In our personal lives, I think if you choose a challenging life, you will improve yourself more. We can live different versions of lives, but the importance is you can understand more about yourself. You will be able to see many perspectives about life and try new things that you may haven’t tried before, therefore it’s more meaningful.
Looking at the bad points, taking risks could be a wrong decision if you are not ready so your mental health will be affected a lot, leading to unsteady emotions, and if you cannot overcome, it’s easy to decrease motivation. Moreover, there will be a number of consequences that we cannot predict. Sometimes, we may lose the achievements that we’re having right now.
To sum up, I think we should face dangers more in both professional lives and personal lives due to the positive aspects I mentioned above and the plus points will always dominate the bad sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86068111455 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4868911268 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0565958562 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214892743506 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712489621997 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599813321354 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145722823093 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480079174765 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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