Cities are getting big and overcrowded. Give some causes and suggest the solutions needed.
A popular issue occurring currently is that many people are moving to urban areas, resulting in overpopulation and other bad impacts. In this essay, I’ll discuss the causes and suggest some solutions to reduce this alarming problem.
First of all, the main reason is that there are more job opportunities and the quality of life in the city than in the countryside. In the city, there are plenty of jobs and fields such as fashion or IT that attract people, who want to get well-paid jobs and invest in a variety of fields, which are not common in the country. In addition, a lot of people believe that life in the city is better, due to the fact that, there are more supermarkets, transportation, and high-quality services for healthcare or education with modern equipment. These amenities can offer them full and comfortable lives. However, if too many people move to the city, there will be fewer opportunities for careers due to the competitive performances among indicates. Moreover, it would be difficult to control social security, the environment will also be badly affected, and social evils can occur more frequently.
Nevertheless, an effective solution that can resolve this problem is to develop new ways to improve the economy in rural areas so that inhabitants can find good jobs and have a better life. I think the strength of the rural area is agriculture, they need to expand more investments in this. They should modernize the methods of growing crops and raising animals to export because the food consumption in big cities and metropolises, where agriculture is not the concentration, is really big. Or another way is to create countryside traveling, it’s a prevalent activity recently. More people choose the countryside as a venue to visit because they can discover huge gardens, being closer to nature.
In conclusion, too many people settling down in big cities is understandable because they would have more opportunities to improve their careers and personal lives, but this can cause unpleasant consequences. Renewing and developing the economy in rural areas is considered a good way to reduce this issue by focusing on the strength of those areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08611111111 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94769082043 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1294796078 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.066666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139792854956 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420191871654 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057211629497 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883898033798 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344216893751 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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