Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a method to live with it. From my point of view, i mostly disagree with this notion since climate change can bring a plenty of drawbacks for the human's life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, climate change will lead hugly dangerous for the health of citizens. Not only do the children can be easily to get flu, sick and ills, but also many adults can get some disease about respiratory, digestion or reproduction such as sinusitis, laryngitis and bronchitis. The individuals who do not have enough energy to core with these disease will take the terrible influence when they get older. Furthermore, the battery and virus can be easier to breed in this kind of atmosphere. In wet or humid weather can be the appropriate habit of some virus. Battery have horrible affection and disease for the health and individual's life. To illustrate, anophen which is caused of dengue disease the obsess of all people on around the world. they usually live in wet environment and tropics, transmitting though blood and there are more than 500 million dead by this disease. In addition, nowaday people can have enough ability, knowledge and modern technology to improve the environment for the development of the nation such as electric motorcycle or electric car.
However, people also need to find a way to live wih some terrible climate change which can not change by human energy becaue it is the natural phenomena like monsoon, subtropical and tropical. Morover, adapting with bad climate change will have people increase their resistance. Their body will produce more good battery to cope with the bad one, and alo people will have more knowledge and method to address some disease.
To conclude, by my agruement from these essay i totally disagree with this statement becaue climate change have a lot of drawbacks that people can not live with it. Government need to have the bright plan to solve this problem for the life of individuals better than beffore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...can bring a plenty of drawbacks for the humans life. The following essay will analyse ...
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. At first, climate change will lead hugly...
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Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'these diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; these diseases
... do not have enough energy to core with these disease will take the terrible influence when t...
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...ppropriate habit of some virus. Battery have horrible affection and disease for the ...
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...ophen which is caused of dengue disease the obsess of all people on around the world. they...
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Suggestion: They
...sess of all people on around the world. they usually live in wet environment and tro...
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... electric motorcycle or electric car. However, people also need to find a way...
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...r electric car. However, people also need to find a way to live wih some terr...
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...e and method to address some disease. To conclude, by my agruement from these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94540229885 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54454793706 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5539676366 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282186636329 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940298811772 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113301697086 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207384361006 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870845266447 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.