At the moment , a lot of people think that enjoying their job is better than how much money they can earn. Howerver, there are a plenty of people say that salary ism ore important than all. In this essay, I am going to compare both of these options and then offer my own view.
From one point of view, liking your job more than your money will make your job. In addition, it will make your job be more effective because it can increase their motivation in finishing the workloads. For example, when an employee is encouraged by the others around them, they will try to give their best in their jobs. Moreover, it can increase the sense of belonging towards their works.
From another point of view, money leads to a better life quality. With more money we can do everything, for instance, consuming more, buying good quality products, going on holidays and doing numerous activities. However, it can make them money oriented people. They spend much time only for working to receive high salary. Moreover, they have no time with their family or even their own.
In conclusion, money can help to have a better life, but having high salary is not only the primary factor to lead to happiness and gain a bright future life.
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- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think women should be given the same opportunity to work and excel just like men Others believe that a woman s responsibility should be limited to looking after children and housework What is your opinion Use relevant details and examples to s 56
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- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60550458716 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23916623597 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0207035647 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353711480576 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112901580422 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08369476762 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208313221081 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687494131766 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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