Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is widely believed that all people who are entitled to university education should have provision of free- of-charge education for all, whether rich or poor. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, there are various compelling reasons why students should be allowed to pursue college for free. It could be explained that it would help reduce the huge tuition from their children learning. As a result, their costs of living were less heavy. Besides, the poor and difficult children would have a chance to go to school more and that would create a more educated workforce.
On the other hand, if the free-college policy was carried out, the national economy would have to suffer varying pressure. the educational quality could be low. That is because the teacher would lose the effort to teach with the little salary, which is not enough to pay for their living. Furthermore, the material facilities for equipping every school wastes a lot that causes budget deficits and the nation would go down day- by-day in an economic recession.
To conclude, although tuition waivers seem to be a good idea for people , I believe that the government should not effectuate tuition waivers .
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-20 | Frankenstein Stark | 67 | view |
| 2023-07-20 | Frankenstein Stark | 78 | view |
| 2023-07-20 | Frankenstein Stark | 92 | view |
| 2023-07-20 | Frankenstein Stark | 82 | view |
| 2023-06-16 | honganh2299 | 56 | view |
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would help reduce the huge tuition from their children learning. As a result, th...
^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...school more and that would create a more educated workforce. On the other han...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... would have to suffer varying pressure. the educational quality could be low. That ...
^^^
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aivers seem to be a good idea for people , I believe that the government should no...
^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nt should not effectuate tuition waivers .
^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...should not effectuate tuition waivers .
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05911330049 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56552905301 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3437331318 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199606542865 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069486954822 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800789917813 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132715894482 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780084961976 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.