Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required.
Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?
Rapid spread of contagious diseases has made life in most parts of the world harder. Though medications for most of the communicable diseases racing havoc in these nations are available readily around the developed countries, the countries with poor economy have become victims by the inability to afford proper medication. I strongly believe that drug companies should come to aid for this problems by reducing the prices of their products in the countries facing such problems.
First of all, the healthcare system shound be underpriced, if not free as a proper healthcare is a primary right of a person, which no one shound be deprived form. Medications when available freely, the life expectancy of the people will increase as well as the number of people dying due to poverty be reduced. The increase in the life expectancy of Bulgara after the provision of free medicines exemplifies how reduced cost of healthcare aids to the problem.
Moreover, the reduction in the cost would not only aid to the general population, but endorse buisness for the drug companies as well. Reducing the prices effects the number of units solds for the drug, which will help the buisnesses in return. For instance, a 30% growth in the sales of paracetamol in Nepal was seen due to the reduction of the prices by only 10 per cent.
Summing things up, prices of the medical products is not only benificial to the burning issue of unafforadable healthcare in many countries, but assists in the growth in buisness of the drug companies as well. Thus, reducing prices of medications and healthcare system is the third-world countries is an optimal solution to prevent mass hysteria in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, third, thus, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00711743772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77100141727 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6633020331 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263658739891 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940819038625 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776686876276 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152916533553 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887104292847 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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