The pie charts below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s (rewrite).
Given are the pie chart and the table which illustrate the reasons of less productivity of worldwide land and the percentages of land degraded by different factors in three continents: North America, Oceania and Europe in the 1990s.
Overall, the main cause of worldwide land degradation was over-gazing by cattle and Europe was the most degraded region which caused by deforestation.
The first thing to mention is that the major reasons of less productivity of agricultural land in global were over-gazing by animals and deforestation which contributed to 35% and 30%, respectively. However, over-cultivation was also responsible for land degradation with 28%.
Secondly, comparing in three regions, Europe had the highest percentage of land degraded with 23%, which was higher than Oceania and North America by 10% and 18%, respectively. In detail, the main causes of land degradation were different in three regions as the deforestation was responsible in Europe with 9.8%, the over-gazing was the dominant reason in Oceania with 1.3% and the over-cultivation was happened in North-America with 3.3%.
- Many people choose to copy celebrities seen on TV and in magazines Is it a positive or a negative development 66
- Someone claim that public transport should be free of charge and others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 90
- The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- Many people spend a lot of time using communication technology. What are the reasons for this? What is the impact with their families and other people? 70
- The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B However due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists governments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of tr 80
the main cause of worldwide land degradation was over-gazing by cattle and Europe was the most degraded region which caused by deforestation.
the main cause of worldwide land degradation was over-gazing by cattle, and Europe was the most degraded region which was caused by deforestation.
the main cause of worldwide land degradation was over-gazing by cattle, and Europe was the most degraded region caused by deforestation.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 84 100
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 171 200
No. of Characters: 905 1000
No. of Different Words: 84 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.292 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.273 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.21 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.539 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.826 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4