If a product is good or it meets people’s needs, people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment. Agree or disagree?
It is agrued that a benefits product is enough for the individuals, so advertising is insignificant and no more than entertainment. From my point of view, i mostly disagree with this notion because of advertising's advantages for people life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of modern technology such as social media, internet and smart phone, advertising is hugely significant for the individual life. Not only can the citizen appoarch the best quality product, but also advertisment will be an strength advice for individuals. Furthermore, numerous occupation will be created for the postgraduates such as maketting, so the percentage of umemployment in their country will be decreased drammatically. To illustrate, there was a survey by Jorhson, the famous scientist and professor, which was about the success of Europien nation during advertising industrial time. The statistic showed that nearly ever nation has got a plenty of achevement.
However, we can not negate the importance of quality product for the individual life and nation's development. A various of protein can be provided to the adolesence for improving their immunity. Moreover, some government or the managers of many large companies will take advantage from advertisment's revenue for their own profit, harmful influence will be led by this action, reducing the development of their country.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally disagree with this statement since advertisment bring a lot of merits for individuals. The state need to have clear plans to improve their economic for the development of the nation.
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| 2023-06-22 | hieu13092006 | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
It is agrued that a benefits product is enough for the individuals, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international world...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... product, but also advertisment will be an strength advice for individuals. Furthe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nation has got a plenty of achevement. However, we can not negate the importanc...
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...cing the development of their country. To conclude, by my agrument from the ess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3984962406 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1494157562 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4420488924 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179755503778 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652102671055 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621727577972 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121516569952 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081227567778 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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