Nowadays the eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing many health problems, including obesity.
Why do people tend to eat so badly?
What can be done to improve eating habits?
As the consumption of fast food has been in an incline, many health problems associated with the unhealthy eating habits have risen, including serious problems like obesity. Though these trend are eminent to all, there seems to be not much of a change in people’s behaviour towards their food consumption pattern, where the issues like high paced life and inability to cook are to blame. In order to solve these issues collective efforts of both people and the fast food chains are essential.
People nowadays are overly invested in their work, thus having some time out of their hefty schedule to cook is often not possible. With their high demanding job, draining all their energy at work, people find themselves too tired to spend their spare time to cook healthy meals at home, but resort to ordering food online, which in general are less healthier than home cooked meals. Moreover, in most countries, young people do not bother to learn how to cook in the first place, thus ordering-in or going to fast food chains becomes their only option. A survey by Good Morning America stated, fast food chains are the leading cause for growing health problems in America, while the problems will get more serious, with number of youths not having any cooking skills growing by the day.
These unhealthy eating habits can only be solved with the collaborative efforts of people, government and the businesses. Firstly, people should be encouraged to do meal-prep for the entire week in their free time, such that they can have an option for a healthy meal when necessary in a matter of seconds, with few click of buttons in the microwave. Additionally, young people should be provided home economics classes in school, where they can learn the importance of a healthy diet as well as gain the skill to make the meals by themselves. Furthermore, fast food chains can play their part for the solution by introducing healthier choices in their menu, such that people are encouraged to make healthier choices even when eating out.
In conclusion, the spike in health issues associated with unhealthy eating habits in the current world are the result of people choosing a high paced life with rarely any time to cook a homemade meal as well as the growing dependency of youths on fast food. These issues can be elleviated by encouraging people to try meal-prep, while making food businesses introduce healthier options in their menu.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...ering food online, which in general are less healthier than home cooked meals. Moreover, in mo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such that they can have an option for a healthy meal when necessary in a matter ...
^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun click seems to be countable; consider using: 'few clicks'.
Suggestion: few clicks
... necessary in a matter of seconds, with few click of buttons in the microwave. Additional...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94390243902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47606147507 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5396196375 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.923076923 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5384615385 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22092105787 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942056782709 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560067003173 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155960135353 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453207770571 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...ering food online, which in general are less healthier than home cooked meals. Moreover, in mo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such that they can have an option for a healthy meal when necessary in a matter ...
^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun click seems to be countable; consider using: 'few clicks'.
Suggestion: few clicks
... necessary in a matter of seconds, with few click of buttons in the microwave. Additional...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94390243902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47606147507 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5396196375 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.923076923 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5384615385 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22092105787 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942056782709 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560067003173 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155960135353 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453207770571 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.