Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Tourism as an economic niche is beyond all dispute a double-edged sword. Alongside the overarching upswing of the traveling bandwagon, people believe it has given rise to pernicious effects on the local habitat and the country’">country’s lives as a whole. I partially agree with the notion and I will give the interpretation.
On the positive aspect, when tourism comes to fruition in a country, it will bolster the country’">country’s economy in leaps and bounds and somewhat ameliorate the cultural value. For instance, in impoverished countries, traveling services as microfinance can particularly catalyze the moribund state.
However, when tourism comes on across the board, it will get diminishing returns. Nowadays, its downsides have loomed large and sounded the alarm bell about a need for intervention. To elucidate, a large part of areas enclosing tourist attractions are crawling with trash from tourists’ activities, which renders the habitat derelict and below par. In particular, travel services also jeopardize the inhabitants’ lives, even plague and put them in disorder, whereas much of the noxious fumes from travel vehicles are prone to boost air pollution. As proof, from my own experience back in the day, after traveling the length and breadth of a tourist attraction, I perceived a real affair that the environment and atmosphere there was not up to scratch anymore while local people’s attitude was not friendly as in the heyday.
On the other hand, as a holidaymaker, each of us should instantaneously help the local people revitalize the environment and make a turnaround to their stable life. First, tourists should partake in more cultural activities of local people, as opposed to a whirlwind of ones creeping into the natural environment. Besides, it is paramount to spare no effort to venerate the inhabitant’s cultural identity, whereas behaving amicably to them. Last but not least, maintaining public hygiene should also be obeyed by the traveling fraternity.
In conclusion, despite the scope of virtues of tourism in countries, its drawbacks outnumber and have an adverse impact on not only the local environment but also the culture of inhabitants. Therefore, tourists should not squander chances to help rectify and revamp the natural conditions in the countries they travel to.
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- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to How true is this statement What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments Give reasons for your answer and incl 89
- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to How true is this statement What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments Give reasons for your answer and incl 89
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51239669421 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52718218967 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.144129334 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0625 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250700750636 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067511068224 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400462263971 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132594464453 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027078405725 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.