More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
With the increasing trend of people willingly sharing personal information online for everyday activities like socializing on social networks or banking purposes, I believe this development has a predominantly negative impact. The main reason for my stance is the heightened vulnerability to criminal activities that individuals expose themselves to.
To begin with, the loss of privacy when sharing personal information on the internet is a significant concern. By revealing addresses, phone numbers, and other sensitive details, individuals become targets for unauthorized access and potential misuse of their data. Cybercriminals can exploit this information for fraudulent activities, causing severe financial and emotional distress for the victims. For instance, some companies collect and analyze user data without adequate transparency or consent, profiting from trading personal information.
Furthermore, sharing private details online opens the door to harassment, stalking, and unwanted solicitation. This not only erodes the boundaries between public and private life but also leads to intrusion and feelings of vulnerability. Moreover, the pressure to maintain an online presence often leads individuals, especially the youth, to compare themselves to others. Consequently, users may experience low self-esteem and mental health problems. Additionally, these dynamics hinder healthy human interactions and have negative effects on the individual's overall well-being.
In conclusion, while sharing personal information online has its advantages and disadvantages, I firmly believe that the risks of personal information falling into the wrong hands outweigh the benefits. Therefore, it is critical for individuals to exercise caution and be mindful of the potential consequences associated with sharing private information online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29133858268 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2354253099 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681102362205 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3684675477 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242423619946 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725833866456 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983896166022 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150893320331 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113751814029 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.35 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.2 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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